The first bit of our opening got much higher marks than the second part, we had already expected that to happen.
These were the questions we asked and we tallied them up and came out with a score which had the most for each.
- Did the opening appeal to you? 4
- Did the black and white create suspense? 4
- Was the monologue clear? 4
- Did the monologue create suspense? 4
- How successful was the montage? 1
- How successful was the cutting and walking shot? 2
- How was the positioning of the credits? 2
- How effective was the sound? 1
- Did the ending make sense? 1
- What is your general rating of the opening? 2
General overall opinions were good to help us work on what to do next
Good points about our film were-
- Beginning is really good, Beginning is better than the second part
- Kettle noise is good
- Good title positioning
- Good cutting effect when walking up the street
Things that weren't too good-
- Tension is spoiled when it starts the montage
- montage music is too upbeat and happy, sounds like a 'children's nursery rhyme type song'
- The second bit just doesn't fit
So we have decided on changing the second part as the feedback is not that good for the second part.
We have come up with a few ideas
- Kindnapping
- filming dark alleyways
- 999 call
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