So this is the film we made and got audience feedback on
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B2IMEZRGaq0&context=C48cd6b8ADvjVQa1PpcFMnhLDBgC0m0tFVT6mvigZZ18eeZMDE6OQ=
We have to decided to alter the second part completely( baring in mind this is not our finished video)